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Art of the Onward March

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December 11, 2004
Art of the Onward March by ~terov takes you on a journey of reflection, showing how one can fall back and watch while the world goes to hell in order to create a masterpiece, whether artistic or revolutionary. The ideas and linguistic delight offered make it difficult to put out of your mind after reading it. His voice, while slightly sarcastic, is loud and memorable. In the end, makes you wonder - who wins?
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And here you are, perched on the eaves
of your fathers' understanding,
ripening in folly as the chorus swells.
Like an heir to Babylon you meditate
on the melting of peoples
sloughed into your flaming voice and hands.

This is your manifesto, artist of broken
lampposts and husks of homes, streets
where metal whines like
mangled mongrel dogs still limping
roads emptied behind the
crackling gravel of your many, many brushes.

Your calligraphy is stroked in slanted reds
and browns, ink leaning from the force of your
latest, brightest work.
Soap. We'll need lots of soap.

Updated [3/23/04] small revisions; the first stanza breathed a sigh of relief.
Updated with new surface structure and some other stuff.
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